Your PPC Sucks

This PPC advert was found on the Bing network by a ‘gentle dave’ from the UK.  Unsure about the name, but thanks for the submission!

You get the impression that the person writing this ad thought, “f**k,  35 characters already. Mweh, that’ll do”.

I think most people would  add ‘duty’ and remove ‘could’ to make this ad copy more comprehensible?!

What’s your view on this advert?  Do you think that the promotional message is affected?